Saturday, March 17

Is Raat Ki Subah...

खुल्ली आँख से,
जब देखा यह जहाँ,
रौशनी है चाई हर कहीँ,
पर ना जाने क्यूँ, दिल में बहुत,
अँधेरा है वहाँ.

बीतें लम्हों की परछाई,
आज भी सताती है,
आने वाला कल क्या लाएगा,
इसी सोच में यह अँधेरी रात,
खुल्ली आखों में बीत जाती है.

यह कैसा डर,
मन में एक्सार रहता है.
कहीं खो ना दूं खुद को खुद से,
यही सोच कर ना जाने क्यूँ,
दर्द आखों से हर दम बहता है.

समय ना जाने क्यूँ,
अब रुक रुक कर चलता है.
इस रात की सुबह कब होगी,
यह सवाल हर पल, धीमी धड़कन के साथ,
समय की नोक पर ढलता है.

27 comments:

  1. :) past sometimes even though we cant change or do anything it still troubles a lot ..

    I like ot live that I live in TODAY as past is gone nothing can be done, future we dont know .. so might as well enjoy the today

    a beautiful poem ..

    Bikram's

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    1. thank you veer ji for liking the poem..

      and very well said, one must live in today, you never know about the future and past is past, no point of crying over it!

      regards
      rahul

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  2. beautifully written again.

    because of this vote and return vote i missed some of your posts. will go through your archive later coz i like ur posts.

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    1. thank you Deb,

      hope to see you around on my other posts :-)

      rahul

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  4. Beautifully written. Very sensitive... there is a lot of pain hidden beneath but what I love the most is the ray of hope that shines through, wonderful :)

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    1. thank you thank you thank you Arti for such a nice comment...and thanks for liking the poem!

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  5. इस रात की सुबह कब होगी
    beautiful poem

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  6. Brilliant- even this word is an understatement i would say.

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    1. woaah, thanks Viyoma !

      am glad you liked the poem !

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  7. har raat ki subah hot hai aur hogi bhi....sunder bhav hai'n rachna k....

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    1. thank you Indu,

      acha laga sunn kar ki aapko kavita pasand aai...

      haan aapne sahi kahaa, har raat ki subah hoti hai aur har din ek nayi subah lekar aata hai !

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  9. Beautiful poem yet again. I loved the second paragraph. Is raat ki subaah jaldh hogi aur sundar hogi:)

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    1. thank you Saru for liking the 2nd para :D and the poem :P

      haan bahut jald hogi is raat ki subah !

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  10. समय ना जाने क्यूँ,
    अब रुक रुक कर चलता है..
    Aisa hi hota hai...nice poem..

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  11. lovely rahul , very well written !

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