Monday, March 5

Dil Se...


एक  अजब सी कशिश,
एक अलग सा एहसास, 
बार बार मन  में आज आता है.

कहना चाहूं तुमसे कुछ,
ना जाने क्यूँ, यह कंभख्त दिल,
बोलने से घबराता है.

ना जाने कब से,
ज़हन में उठा यह ख्याल है,
बयां करना चाहूं इसे जब,
जुबां पर शब्द,
आते साथ ही लडखडाता है.

दर्द दबा है,
कहीं गहन में मेरे,
कितनी भी कोशिश करू ,
कदम नहीं बढते आगे मेरे.

फिर भी,
उम्मीद यही लगाए रखी है,
एक दिन जब मिलोगे तुम,
पूछेंगे तुम्हारे दिल से,
क्या यही दर्द,
तुम्हे भी दस्तक दे कर जाता है?

This is my third attempt in writing Hindi Poetry. I know i am not good at it and I must stop writing!

P.S: This poem is reviewed by a fellow blogger friend Indu from Hridyanubhuti

Thank you Indu for your valuable time and input!

13 comments:

  1. Rahul please aap aur Hindi kavita likhiye zarur,coz aapne achchi likhi hai...

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    1. thank you Indu...aapne help ki tab hi jaakar yeh achi ho paayi hai :-)

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  2. hey Rahul. this one is really cool. please write these hindi poems more often :)

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    1. thanks for liking the poem deb.

      i guess i shouldn't stop writing :P

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  3. WOW.. and you saying its not good .. BAI JI this is million times better then what i have tried in punjabi.

    I was able ot understand it .. So dont stop and keep writing all the best ..

    Bikram's

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    1. thank you Veer ji but one must not compare !

      you must share with me the link to the punjabi poem...

      if you really think i shouldn't stop...i definitely won't :-)

      rahul

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  4. This is great...BTW, who says you are not good at it? If you think so, you are way too modest...

    Keep writing!

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    1. i'll keep writing Saru whenever it clicks...btw read your recent poem...totally loved it!!!

      rahul

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  5. Touching, that's all I can say... the last para gave the perfect punch. I really loved it Rahul, do keep them coming, please :)

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    1. thank you Arti for liking the poem !

      regards
      rahul

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  7. hey rahul bhaiya...as usual, u are superb in hindi writeup also.

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    1. thank you my sweet little anonymous friend :-)

      regards
      rahul

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